Child Keeper

How can I improve this short poem?

Afraid to show I had written a story, my name is hidden inside a secret acrostic in silence, the holder of sin illegal. The black on black history, the angel fallen from grace will and the soft murmur without cause, which has persisted, but who left no trace. The child is low, the captivity of beauty, held the lack of thought, the name, acronym, always concealed through Layers of street deception.

Chew! What and where is the secret? Where is the deception? I heard the rumor and was not aware? Why are you afraid to show? What are you afraid to show? If you want to improve this poem does not answer all these questions. Just keep me hanging, twisting slowly, the pain of knowing.

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